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Bleeding Butterflies by ~GC-Fan:iconGC-Fan:



Twisting and turning
My stomach begins to knot
I dream of your face
Knowing it'll never smile for me

Bleeding butterflies
You flutter harder and harder
It's just my bleeding butterflies
Trying to survive

I long to hear your voice again
It only makes my heart race
But when I think the pace is normal
My heart skips a beat and again it aches

Bleeding butterflies
You flutter harder and harder
It's just my bleeding butterflies
Trying to survive

You rub against my arm while walking by
My stomach turns and i get a little queesy
But when my knees regain their strength
I realize...

The pain in my heart
The knot in my stomach
and how I shake with ease
It's the butterflies, they're fluttering

And they flutter for you.

But you made them bleed!
How could you?
You made my heart ache
And
My stomach knot
You cause the bleeding butterflies,

That are just trying to survive.
©2006-2009 ~GC-Fan
:icongc-fan:

Author's Comments

I was talking to a friend of mine and we're having the same feelings about someone...and she said she felt weird every time she saw his face. And I said like butterflies.... she said no, it hurts. I said " it's because they're bleeding. The butterflies are bleeding." And this is what came out. . . . .

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:iconmoosepickles:
i love it exepy for the very end.


But you made them bleed!
How could you?
You made my heart ache
And
My stomach knot
You cause the bleeding butterflies,

That are just trying to survive.


thats the only part that doesnt fit. otherwise im in love with it.
:iconshae2003:
I agree with Moosepickles... I like it, but the ending doesn't seem to fit the tone...

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:heart:Shae:heart:
:iconebory:
sounds calmly painful...the end's a bit more emotional though
i like it!

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Where's your treasure, where's your gold if you get the world yet lose your soul?
:iconleliz:
hmmm.....I think the end was a little sudden, but I still think it fit.....it's really about the betrayal and destrucion of something beautiful, like love and butterflies......whoa, there's a good title for a poem

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Screw Jello....There's always room for Haagan-dazs!!!

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